I don't often go shopping. I just go there when I've already decided what I need to buy. I like to go to the big shops but they are not very the fashionable, luxurious ones. In there, I can buy clothes with a rather good quality and suitable price. I feel uncomfortable when I am surrounded by the sales assistants. I prefer to be alone and look for whatever I need to try. The only thing I desire that I can find the assistance easyly when I need. The assistants should be standing at some areas where they can be found quickly. Normally, I look for them when I can find something that I want; or sometime I want to ask about the usage of the products. Sometime, I also don't know what I should buy. That's the case when I feel bored or when I'm waiting for someone in shop. Particularly, when I need to buy some gifts, of source not for me. I'm not good at this, so I usual ask the salespeople for suggestions, recommendation.
Generally, in Singapore, I feel OK when I go shopping. I can find anything I need and have enough help from the assistants.
As a friend, I find out some grammar mistake in your paragraph. May I have the comments on it? If you don't want,I will ignore.
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate your help. I'm studying English. Any comments are welcomed!
ReplyDeleteI'm also studying English but having no enough good condition as you. Hope below paragraph be useful for you and also what you mean. Well study !
ReplyDeleteI don’t go to shopping very frequently (or I don’t often go shopping). I just go there when I’ve already decided what I need to buy. I like to go to the bug shops but they’re not very the fashionable, luxurious ones. There, I can buy clothes with a rather good quality and suitable price. I don’t feel comfortable (or I feel uncomfortable) when I am surrounded by the shop-assistants. I prefer to be alone and look for whatever I need to try. The only thing I desire that I can find the assistance easily when I need. The assistants should be standing at some areas where they can be found quickly. Normally, I look for them when I can’t find out something that I want; or sometimes I want to ask about the usage of the products.
Sometimes, I also don’t know what I should buy. That’s the case I feel bored or I go shopping and must waiting for someone. Particularly (or specially), when I need to buy some gifts, of course not for me, I’m not good at this, so I usually ask the shop-assistant for the suggestions.
Generally, in Singapore, I feel OK when I go shopping. I can find anything I need and have enough help from the assistants.
You're a good friend. The only thing I desire that I can know how wrong am I. I think that you understand what I mean. The teacher did help me but 1h per week is not enough for all my problems: grammar, vocabulary, pronunciation, writing, ...
ReplyDeleteIt's very kind of you as to help me to review when you have time.
Thanks in a bunch.
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ReplyDeleteDo you get some mistake which I want to show you ?
ReplyDeleteA few tips in simple writing:
- Not use repeated works
- Audit grammar of the sentences, in this case: When clause
- Note kind of word: verb, adverb, noun,... and the position of them in sentences. Ex: use -> usage, easy -> easily
- Verbalize what you mean to sentence in correct grammar rule, not write down what you think in mind
My English is not really so good, but I want to share to you my tips, maybe useful for you.
Thanks for your advice.
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